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Mind break – Tour of the past

Tour of the past

So our plan was cancelled and we now have nothing to do now

rRyan took off saying he had to complete his invention . Zee was very drunk so she slept like the dead. Ren had no work so he just started playing video games

rDyne and Elle offered us for a tour of Raizon we accepted since we had nothing

rSo we left the apartment and started heading towards the parking

rThe parking was nothing special just cars parked on a laser bridge top of others in groups of three

rDyne removed his car the car looked like a DeLorean or a certain movie . His car had an amalgamation of colours painted on it so i couldn't tell you how it looked

rThe car was a 4 seater which was good for us but it was nothong different from a regular car

rJay : Doea this also have some sort of tech embedded in it

rDyne : nah nah its nothing like it . This one is a custom made car

rThis exact car once appeared in my dream and i fell in love with it . So i asked Ryan to make it for me

rElle : He begged in front if him it was quite hilarious to watch him do that

rDyne : Hey , why are trying to embarress me

rElle : Relax they don't mind it

rAfter that we shared quite many stories with each other it was quite a fun time

rDyne got off from the car and stretched

rWe were in a huge park and there was a big statue of a man wearing robes and he pointed towards the sky

rDyne : This big statue right here is the person we are supposed to meet

rHe is responsible for law and order in Raizon . Everyone respects him as a person not as a god

r. He has divine powers but he not a god

rElle : Why are we here at such a boring place i think we should go someplace else

rSo she took us to a library (very interesting place)

rThere were legit books stored here i thought it would be something more advance like a hologram reading the book to me

rThere was almost noone that day as all of the people who visit the library were at their jobs

rSo i just pulled a history book because i was very interested in Raizon's history . And why is this city underwater ?

rEvery tribe , species has its own weakness like the elf . The elves have a high mana affinity and sometimes use spirits , they also have better concentration and stability which makes them good archers

rBut they prefer silent places and places where spirits live like forest

rThey dislike crowded areas like a town or a city

rbecause of the noise

rThey have high sensitivity to sound which is what causes pain to them

rIn the case of people of Raizon their tribe was intelligent and they disliked fighting so they settled underwater which was peaceful and also made contact with the guardian of the seas Tempest to protect them

rThe city is protected by a special membrane which repels water and can only allow tempest inside the city

r

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Mind break : The beginning
ch 2 : let the games begin
ch 3: I am in debt before even starting the game
Ch 4 : Still traveling
Ch:5 Helios
Ch : 6 : Wong
Ch : 7 : The hunt preparation
Ch 8 : I should not have pissed him off
Ch:10: The temple of emerald zaguar
Ch : 11 : Falling for the obvious
Ch:12: Power of pulse
Ch: 13 : Face off with the emerald zaguar
Ch: 14: Goodbye wong
Side stories:Wong: 1
Side story: wong: 2
prologue:2
Mind break : A hero of 2 time timelines
Ch 2: Arrivals
Ch:2:God's ascension festival :part 1
X : 1
Ch:3: God's ascension festival part 2
Ch:4: God's ascension festival part 3
Ch : 5 : Electrocution
Ch : 6 : First blood
Ch:7: hero's ascension : part 1
Ch :8: i took care of bandits :part 2
Important decision
Attack of the dragons
Plot armor
Crimson dawn stone
1 month later
The dungeon
I thought this is a fantasy world
Point of view : McElroy 1
Mc explaning enchanted elemental gear 1
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Main quest or side quest
Reminiscent
Adventurers guild
I spent the whole chapter on guild registration
Tempest 1
Tempest 2
Tempest 3
Explaning my weird skill tree
I thought this was a side quest
Underwater city Raizon
Conclusion
Tempest's penance
Dinner with the royal family
battle - 1
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Metals
Spear of the successor
Tempest returns
True colours
descriptions
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Hol up repeat again please
Letter
The mourning
About raizon
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Ah yes the start of a mini story
A time travel segment
Raizon 245 years before
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Tour of the past
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Team Omega
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Tempest desends
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