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Mind break – Spear of the successor

Spear of the successor

As we both flew away in opposite direction a dust cloud was formed rendering the audience and the competitors blind for a short while

rAs the dust cloud cleared a gold shine could be seen even from a distance

r gradually the cloud cleared and on the ground there was the spear of judgement lodged into the ground with a red cloth wrapped around its end

rSuddenly someone whispered in my ear

r? : Oh hero of the crimson dawn wield the spear

rI stepped fowards and started walking towards the spear while my opponent was still coughing dust

rWhen i reached the spear i glanced at it .My reflection could be seen very clearly

rI went to remove the spear from the ground just as my hand touched the spear a golden light shot out of it and went into the sky and then it diminished in split second

rThe spear had changed its form

rThe red cloth was still there at the end

rThe head of the spear had changed drastically

rthere were two ends going each side and crossing over each other the middle portion was hollow it was black colored with gold on its end on its side were 2 floating fragments

r? : This spear has taken the form of your soul and transformed itself

r? : This spear belongs to you now use it well hero of the crimson dawn

rJay : Who is this and how are you talking to me and also thank you fot the spear

r? : My name is nelson . Rakhael's grandfather and the previous owner of the spear

rJay : So why don't you give the spear to your grandson

rNelson : Even you know the answer he's incompetent to weild it

rJay : So what do i have special in me you are giving me this . Also why don't you have a last name

rNelson : Ill explain later about the last name

rNelson : And because you are the hero ....

rJay : See i stole this jewel so i am definitely not the one you are looking for

rNelson : The stone will only stick to the actual hero if it's someone fake it will kill them

rJay : That's dark

rNelson : Anyway you have a fight to win , All the best

r

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Mind break : The beginning
ch 2 : let the games begin
ch 3: I am in debt before even starting the game
Ch 4 : Still traveling
Ch:5 Helios
Ch : 6 : Wong
Ch : 7 : The hunt preparation
Ch 8 : I should not have pissed him off
Ch:10: The temple of emerald zaguar
Ch : 11 : Falling for the obvious
Ch:12: Power of pulse
Ch: 13 : Face off with the emerald zaguar
Ch: 14: Goodbye wong
Side stories:Wong: 1
Side story: wong: 2
prologue:2
Mind break : A hero of 2 time timelines
Ch 2: Arrivals
Ch:2:God's ascension festival :part 1
X : 1
Ch:3: God's ascension festival part 2
Ch:4: God's ascension festival part 3
Ch : 5 : Electrocution
Ch : 6 : First blood
Ch:7: hero's ascension : part 1
Ch :8: i took care of bandits :part 2
Important decision
Attack of the dragons
Plot armor
Crimson dawn stone
1 month later
The dungeon
I thought this is a fantasy world
Point of view : McElroy 1
Mc explaning enchanted elemental gear 1
Mc explains enchanted elemental gear 2
Main quest or side quest
Reminiscent
Adventurers guild
I spent the whole chapter on guild registration
Tempest 1
Tempest 2
Tempest 3
Explaning my weird skill tree
I thought this was a side quest
Underwater city Raizon
Conclusion
Tempest's penance
Dinner with the royal family
battle - 1
Battle-2
Metals
Spear of the successor
Tempest returns
True colours
descriptions
Combined skill
Hol up repeat again please
Letter
The mourning
About raizon
The day of the note part : 1
Day of the note part : 2
Ah yes the start of a mini story
A time travel segment
Raizon 245 years before
The phone
Time travel
Metal magic
Back to the past
Fire magic
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What exactly happened : part 1
How to prove that someome is your descendent
Dyne
Ah yes a quest
The team
Plan
Phizon
Tour of the past
The second day
Skills currently
The light that penetrates the night sky
After the light
Rescue mission
Rescue mission complete
Summoning Tempest
Team Omega
The horn
Observation on the blood demon
Strict time limit
Tempest desends
Ryan's Garage
Step 1
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Gift
CHAOS
Pov : Sara
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